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  • As Megan, Madam, and Stars moved into the defensive cannon base, they decided to split up to cover more ground. Madam, while looking through some Chat files, discovered that the Chat was creating another Chat Star on the galaxies outer reaches. Before she could report her discover to the others, she was ambushed as Chat forces moved in on her. Chat_star.jpg



    Mean while at a star that few ever have and ever do go to, because it is so so so far far away. The name of the star is Zorrealia 00. And in this remote and far away stars orbit their is the planet Zorrealia 01. A hot planet where the would have been ocean is but steam constantly being blown by 18744mph winds generated by the heat of being so close to the star.

    After this is Zorrilia 02, a planet made entirely of sand chalk and clay, stuck together by its own gravity and constantly having tornadoes.


    Finally, their is a planet with 5 continents and a ocean. Zorrilia 03. In orbit something large and metallic is being built and is being guarded by a fleet of chat ships.


    The scene zooms in on the planets largest continent, until it is focused into the first person view of a planet native onboard a 75 car train driven by 3 steam engines. Next to him a friendly male of his species sits.

    "So what do you think of the strange aliens from beyond the sky?"

    The main character of the scene: "Weal they don't bother us much, they only seem to come when they need food or to help us evacuate when the sea level rises."

    Character 2: "You know what I think is causing it? The iron moon the aliens are building. I don't understand it, God has already created one moon, why must they build a second moon?"


    Main: "Weal they won't tell anyone, but they have promised they will take it away from the planet as soon as they finish building it."

    The train approaches castle like stone brick walls guarded by 4 cylinder magazine cannons and fuse action rockets, men with 4 cylinder rifles stand ontop watching, the gait is opened and the train makes its way into a large town, the streets are busy with traffic of strange animals being ridden or pulling wagons.

    The train drops off its passengers the 2 step out, and take a moment to look up at the sky at the strange thing.

    Main: "I don't know if its just me or, can anyone help not shake the feeling that, this iron moon they are building is evil?"

    Suddenly a cultist nut bellows in the streets: "The apocalypse is at hand, as the prophecy foretold their shall come forth an evil moon, which shall change the tides and then block out the sun. In that day...."

    5 town guards wearing green coats and steel helmets holding rifles and side armed with sabers interrupt: "Shut up! You will accomplish nothing raising panic. The last thing we want is a war with the aliens. But do know if it comes to that our solders are weal trained and well armed."


    Main: What on God's earth do they think they can do to prevent things who's factories can allow the manufacturing of a moon?"



    Mean while, back on New Havan


    DMR4REAL wrote: Megan "Shit," as she hobbles back into the tunnel, unsure what ship it making its way towards her.

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    • Cloaked, undetected, and in stealth, Lord of the Stars and Madam celestial Saber make their way back to megan.


      Madam celestial saber: "Megan, I have news that will make this day worse."

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    • Megan "If its the new Chat Star, I know. If it's more Chat forces, give me a weapon."

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    • Madam celestial saber: "Uh, just in case..." she takes a focus rifle off of Stars back and hands it to megan, he don't seem to mind as he is already holding a laser rifle.

      Lord of the Stars: "Got a plan?"

      Madam celestial saber: "If you mean if that is a enemy ship, the family secret is that my sword is not made of 100% blamite, their is a slip space crystal in it. If I can detonate my sword inside the ship, it will destroy it."

      Lord of the Stars: "And we will get inside how?"

      Madam celestial saber:............................ Just stay hidden. "

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    • Megan "I'm not a fan of these type of weapons. You got any handguns or assault carbines I can use. And don't worry about the ship," as Republic fighters and a gunship begin to roll in. "The calvary is here."

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    • Lord of the Stars hands megan a smg. "I only have 5 magazines so aim carefully."


      Madam celestial saber: "I picked this up from some of the guards who decided to die." she hands Megan 8 more.

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    • The unknown ship gets light up by the fighters as it bursts into flames and the gunship with a few escorts come near the group. Megan "Thanks but I think it's safe to say our fight is over," as she boards the craft.

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    • They get on and sit tight, relaxingishly.

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    • A medic comes to attend to Megan as she looks at the other two, "Anyone of you heard from the other teams?"

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    • (gtg)

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    • (willl be out most of today)

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      • Uvok is force pushed into a street lamp

      ????: "You wouldn't be in this situation if you would have let me do my job."

      Uvok: "THAT'S WHY I'M FIGHTING YOU CHATHOLE!"

      • Uvok runs to ???? and punches him in the gut. Before the Brute could finish the force wielder off, he is forced into a brickwall by force lightning

      ????: "I DIDN'T WANT IT TO COME TO THIS, BUT YOU FORCED MY HAND!"

      • Uvok growls in pain as the lightning electrocutes him

      ????: "FEEL THE PAIN, REBEL! FEEL THE PAIN YOU HAVE INFLICTED UPON YOURSELF! REGRET YOUR DECISION TO FIGHT FOR THE DAMNED, AND LET YOURSELF BE FREE IN THE VOID THAT AWAITS YOU!"

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      • A Chat shuttle lands on the street near ???? and Uvok. It's entrance ramp lowers down to the road. ???? stops electrocuting his target and immediately bows to the Grand Centurion exiting the shuttle.

      Grand Centurion: "You did your part, Legionnaire.

      ????: "But master, my mission is incomplete! You requested me to kill-"

      • The Grand Centurion ignites his crossguard laser cutlass and slices ???? down in a diagonal slice. He then signals Dark Troopers to retrieve Uvok from his position.

      Grand Centurion: "This is a Brute, correct? Brutes come from the planet of Moris. That must mean he is an exile."

      Sergeant Grimes: "What are you suggesting?"

      • The Grand Centurion extinguishes his blade

      Grand Centurion: "We can have our allies interrogate him there. Knowing any sentient being in the galaxy, they would rather speak to their own kind than an alien."

      • The Dark Troopers enter the shuttle with the unconscious Brute. The Grand Centurion follows their footsteps. Sergeant Grimes does the same. After everyone is inside the shuttle, the shuttle takes off and leaves New Haven. Uvok's gravity hammer is left behind, stuck in the wreckage of a car.
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    • Visius "hay Tyler, is Megan single?"

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    • Tyler "Yes, though don't I think she is looking to settle with anyone any time soon."

      Jess, as they continue to assault the capital, "Has anyone heard from Uvok? He's been dark for a while now."

      (also, why do you keep making charaters but using ???? instead of like unknown or mysterious figure?)

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    • DMR4REAL wrote: Tyler Jess, as they continue to assault the capital, "Has anyone heard from Uvok? He's been dark for a while now."


      (uuuuuhhhh...)

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    • Visius winks at Tyler

      Talot "we have already told you like 5 times not at this moment but we may find out later"

      (anywats gtg)

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    • Tyler "What, you think I want any of that? I've got someone else I'm closer too."

      Jess, downing a soldier as she moves instide, "All I'm saying is I'm concerned for him. We don't have full control of the planet."

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    • Mean while, where ever the dropship is by now

      Lord of the Stars: "So, when will we have full control of the planet?"

      Madam celestial saber: "No rush dear, I am use to having dinner at these hours?"

      Lord of the Stars: *looks at the time* "But its...."

      Madam celestial saber: "Yah, on New Havan."

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    • Visius leans back"i am not talking about you" (now i definetly have to go lol)

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    • (but its only 2 at night.)

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    • Tyler "Oh, and you think she is going to go for you," as they arrive at their evac.

      Megan "No idea, might take a few months at this rate since the planet doesn't really want us here."

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    • Lord of the Stars: "Maby if we hand out free chocolate chip multi grain flower cookies with frosting painted on them to spell out "Join The Good Guys."

      Madam celestial saber laughs: "Oh Stars, if only it was that easy. That's a good one."

      Lord of the Stars: "Eh, doesn't hurt to try it anyway, as long as we have the time."

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      (also, why do you keep making charaters but using ???? instead of like unknown or mysterious figure?)

      (It is just a habit of mine)

      Marine: This is just one city. Just think about the thousands of settlements on this planet. We may have won the battle here, but we still have to prevent the Chat from striking back and retaking this city.

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    • As he waits Lord of the Stars is playing a video game as Madam celestial Saber naps with her head on his lap sound asleep, the video game is taking place on New Havan, and in the game their has just been a terrorist attack on the city capital and the ground to orbit command base, many have died.... The game begins, with the corpses of the fallen getting back up... and they begin walking tword Stars gamming character snarling.

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    • Jess, turning to the marine as chat forces pulled back, "Well, we aren't the only ones attacking the city or the planet. You're right, a battle is not the entire war, but you need to win battles to win the war. We won here today, and we should be happy for that, but you must also be ready to strike again, where ever we are needed."

      Megan "We aren't fucking girl scouts, cookies are going to convince millions to join the Republic. If anything, they will have to be shown the horrors the government has committed, though if they didn't leave after the documents Karl leaked, I don't know if even that would work."

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    • (sorry i took so long just came back from a tour of collage)

      Visius "probably where i come from human chicks dig Turians"

      Talot thrusts his weapon into the air "i am always ready"

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    • Tyler "Well ask her, but like I said, dating is really something she's not into."

      Jess "Karl, the capital is secure but Uvok has gone dark, orders?"

      Karl "Well, the space above the planet is firmly in Republic hands. However, we only control about 15% of the ground currently. Meet the rest of the team at our forward operating base 30 clicks west of the capital. Rest, rearm, and prepare for another deployment."

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    • Marine: "All I am saying is that we will need to fight to protect our territory as we gain more territory."

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    • Jess, turning to the marine, "So we bring in more soldiers to take areas. We give the people supplies to help get them on the right footing. We bring in people who can help them adjust to life without the Chat Empire. We are soldiers for now, fighting to liberate the people from tyranny, but once the fighting stops, we must be able to put down our guns and open our hearts to helping people."

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    • Visius "well it is worth a try, anyways when will we be getting back to base?"

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    • Tyler "About an hour or so. And why Megan?"

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    • Visius "well... ehh... well i kinda fancy her..."

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    • Tyler "Well, then I wish you luck friend," as they headed back to the base.

      Megan, recovering from the battle, sits in her bed, relaxing and waiting for the other teams to come back from their mission.

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    • Cpl. Mendez: *Over comms* We need medical attention and damage control teams at 45 Rocko Street! There are injured civilians trapped underneath a collapsed building!

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    • Jess, stretching her body, "Alright people, anyone who's not to hurt come with me. Everyone else, board the shuttles and head back to base." Jess got into a jeep with a few republic soldiers and drove towards the building, ready to help the civilians. 

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    • Talot "screw them, its time to get out of here!"

      Visius walks over to Megan in her bed "How are you doing Megan?"

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    • Tyler sits in the back of the room, waiting to watch this.

      Megan, looking at him perplexed, "I'm fine, thanks for asking. I'm guessing your mission was successful."

      Jess "We brought the destruction to this city, its the least we can do help them."

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    • Visius "yes it was... it went really well actually"

      Talot grunts "alright then but i better get something out of this"

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    • Unknown Civilian: "God damn Resist-"

      Srgt. Austinson: "We know you don't like us, but that doesn't mean we don't care about you! We are going to help you out in any way we can!"

      • Rubble from the building is still falling off of the walls

      Unknown Civilian: "THEN GET US THE HELL OUT OF THIS MESS!"

      Marine: "I think there is a blocked opening over here! If we can remove this debris, we can get these people out of here!"

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    • Megan "Good to hear," as she goes back to her magazine.

      Jess "You wanted to help rid the galaxy of the Chat right? Well not everything can be solved with a gun," as they arrive at the building. "Okay, start doing search and resuce. I know these people don't like us, but do what you can. And stay alert, they might be armed."

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    • Visius "Well... i was wondering if you wanted to go to the mess hall later with me?"

      Talot mutters "damn humans..."

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      • Cpl. Mendez starts lifting cinder blocks out of the building and placing them on the sidewalk. Other marines move the distorted wooden boards and plastic pallets away from the supposable opening
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    • Megan "Excuse me? Are you asking me on a date to the mess hall?" Tyler had to hold in his laughter from the back of the room.

      Jess, as she helps a civilian to thier feet, noting they have a broken arm and are bleeding from their ear, "What is that supposed to mean Talot?" Other Republic soldiers assist while others stand by, just in case of any attack. 

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    • (sorry I am not posting much, I am trying to build a koopa castle on minecraft, and its not easy, koopa cultural traps require a lot of knowing how to use red stone triggered stuff and precision placing of lava. Also their are no cannons in minecraft so I can't have bullet bill guarded walls. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pYi6xPnFovM )

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    • Tyler looks down in embarresment "No actually, i only wanted to have a chat with you"

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    • Megan "Well we can chat here. Pull up a seat, I'm not going anywhere anytime soon."

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    • Talot doesnt answer Jess he then pulls a massive concrete block out of the way allowing some civilians to escape

      Visius grabs a chair "Alright... so how do you think things are between us... just wondering nothing else"

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    • Jess goes back to helping civilians, calling for medics when needed and trying to calm the people down.

      Megan, laughing, "I literally just meet you man. You seem cool I guess, you're not an ass hat like Talot."

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    • Cpl. Mendez: "One... last... cinder pile..."

      • Cpl. Mendez drops the last three cinder blocks onto the sidewalks

      Cpl. Mendez: "The hole is open now... you can come out..."

      Unknown Civilian: "MY FUCKING LEGS ARE BROKEN! DO YOU EXPECT ME TO CRAWL OUT ON MY OWN?"

      • Cpl. Mendez hesistates at first, but he goes down the hole and carries the word-armed civilian out of the hole

      Cpl. Mendez: "I didn't realize your legs were broken citizen. I apolog-"

      Unknown Civilian: "Apologize... that's not enough for what you buggards did to our homes!"

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    • Visius "Yeah usually when me and Talot are on a mission, i am the brains and he is the muscle"

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    • Jess, coming over to help Mendez, "We realize this is a war, but don't forget your leaders have done to same to our people. We are here to help you," as she brought a Medic over, "We will do everything we can to help you and your people."

      Megan "I see," as she looked around. 

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    • Hiddenlich wrote:
      Cpl. Mendez: "One... last... cinder pile..."
      • Cpl. Mendez drops the last three cinder blocks onto the sidewalks

      Cpl. Mendez: "The hole is open now... you can come out..."

      Unknown Civilian: "MY FUCKING LEGS ARE BROKEN! DO YOU EXPECT ME TO CRAWL OUT ON MY OWN?"

      • Cpl. Mendez hesistates at first, but he goes down the hole and carries the word-armed civilian out of the hole

      Cpl. Mendez: "I didn't realize your legs were broken citizen. I apolog-"

      Unknown Civilian: "Apologize... that's not enough for what you buggards did to our homes!"

      Talot aproches the civilian and points his finger at him "well boo hoo! you can always rebuild... like i always have"

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    • Visius "wait megan... i brought you some flowers, they may be a little crushed but i hope you like them, i will leave you to rest now..." Visius leaves the room and closes the door behind him, he rests his head against the wall, and mutters "i am an idiot!"

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      • The unknown civilian looks at Talot

      Unknown Civilian: "Fack off! Once your Republic gets what they want, they will crush the Resistance and become another Chat Empire! Then you will be an outcast forced to live a normal life!"

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    • Talot "hmmm a normal life? i like the sound of that human"

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    • Lord of the Stars: "Uh, Visius, I don't know how to tell you this but, Megan isn't just a what ever you are with a different ethnicity, if you and her where to hook up as some unknown culture phrases it, weal, it would be like, trying to use car parts and plane parts... If you know what I mean..."

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    • Unknown Civilian: It is harder than it seems, Krogan. And if you fought in some kind of military or paramilitary, it might make your life a living hell...

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    • Visius "Yes it may never work but it is worth a try"

      Talot aproches the civilian so that he is a inch from his face "my life already is a living hell..."

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    • Please leave it alone, its just a civilian, if anything civilians should stay away from us incase someone has alerted the authorities of our presence, we wouldn't want them to get caught in the cross fires. Or, cross lasers, or, cross plasmas, or, cross what evers.

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    • Talot "alright i get your point kig-yar"

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    • Unknown Civilian: "Then it will be even more of a problem once you get... well, I will let you find out on your own."

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    • Talot "once i get what?"

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    • (wierd, got no notifications or emails)

      Jess "Talot, leave the civilian alone. You aren't going to convince them otherwise, and they aren't going to convince you either. We got them out and did our job. Now we need to find Uvok and bring him back."

      Tyler, watching the door close, "That was awkward."

      Megan "You're telling me," as she looks at the flowers. "You told him I'm not looking for dates right?"

      Tyler "Yes," as he sits down, "But clearly he didn't listen."

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    • Strange, I smell stew cooking.

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      • The civilians are being lead (or carried) to a Republic controlled refugee camp by Cpl. Mendez and a few other marines

      Marine: "So, do you know where we should look first, Commander McKathy?"

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    • Jess "Well he never made it back to us in the sewers so we need to check around the capital for any signs of him. Maybe ask some of the locals if they have seen someone looking like Uvok." Calling on the radio, "Tyler, you there?"

      Tyler "Yea Jess, what's up?"

      Jess "You think Megan and you could help on a search and rescue op?"

      Tyler "Give me a second," looking at Megan, "You up for a mission."

      Megan "Yea, I think I'm good."

      Tyler "Okay, we will meet you at your location in twenty."

      Jess "Roger that, out."

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      • The marine runs to a group of houses unscathed by the battle that took place earlier. The knocks on the door of the closest one to the right

      Marine: "The fighting is done, you can come out now!"

      • The sound of rapid footsteps floods the ears of the marine. The door opens, unleashing a group of Salarian immigrants out onto the streets

      Immigrant: "SOKAA TOEI AH! ABU RA TALLAHEDE!"

      • The marine looks down at the ground

      Marine: *To himself* "Okay, this just got complicated."

      • The marine taps a few buttons on his wrist, activating a holographic image of Uvok. He tries to use sign language to communicate to the Salarians, but they don't understand what he is doing.

      Marine: "For god sake, DOES ANYONE SPEAK THE STANDARD LANGUAGE OF THIS GALAXY HERE?"

      • The immigrants looks at each other and shrug their shoulders in unison. The marine moves onto the next house.

      Marine: "Is there anyone in there?"

      Resident: "GET OFF OF MY DOORSTEP BEFORE I SHOOT YOU FROM THE WINDOW!"

      Marine: "Sir, I just asked a question. Did you see-"

      Resident: "NO! NOW GET OFF THE DOORSTEP!"

      • After he does as the resident requests, the marine continues his attempts to interview the locals
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    • Jess comes from behind with a few republic soldiers. "Get me a translator," as one of the soldiers hands her one. "Thank you." Turning to the residence, "We mean you no harm, we are just curious if you have seen anyone who looks like this," as she pulls up a picture of Uvok.

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    • Immigrant: "Unfortunately, we cannot help you. We were hiding in our makeshift basement when the battle occurred."

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    • Jess "Okay, well thank you anyway," as she turns back to the soldiers, "Okay, on to the next house."

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    • Kig-yar, having gotten board and not figuring on any funner way to make them selves useful, take couches chairs and parasails to the roof tops of the tallest buildings on the surrounding outside, bringing lunch boxes and cantines full of ice tea, and 8 kinds of long range rifle per person with 6 ammo boxes, and 2 weapons racks with 3 beam extra beam rifles on them. They sit their looking through covenant binoculars, watching and waiting for if anything decides they feel like coming in to attack.


      Other Kig-yar begin cleaning up the town of any rubber or trash to recycle into something more useful, as seeing watching is already being taken, and looking for something to do with out getting in the watchers way.

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    • Visius aproches Megan and Tyler "i will come with you"

      Talot mutters "hes a brute its not like he will be able to blend in"

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    • right, just look for someone bigger, hairier, and carrying a hammerer then everyone else in this city.

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    • Talot "just look for the ugly, naked ape..."

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    • Actually he has a rather nice set of armor.

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    • Talot "Which only covers his genitals and his sholders as well as a helmet, but nothing else"

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    • Jess "That would be true, except if the Chat wanted to take him somewhere without us noticing."

      Megan "Then let's go," as she hops into a jeep.

      Tyler "I got the gun then."

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    • Talot "And brought straight to Hado Shinjitsu... damn we better find him quick"

      Visius "roger, i will take the passenger seat, anyways Megan did you like the flowers?"

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    • Jess "You don't know that. Besides, he would have to be taken off world for that, and we control the space around New Haven."

      Megan driving, "They were... nice," as she focuses on driving. Tyler laughs to himself. 

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    • Visius checks the clip on his weapon, his mandibles twitching "g... good"

      Talot "good hopefully we can find him... "

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    • Megan shakes her head as they enter the capital city. "Damn, we did a number to this place."

      Tyler "Eh, I've seen worse. At least there are buildings still standing."

      Megan "Yea, and no death squads rounding up people."

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    • Visius "Damn... this place is a mess..."

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    • Jess "I hope so too," as she sees the jeep. "The rest of the team is here."

      Megan parked the jeep as hopped out, running up and hugging Jess. Tyler, nudging Visius, "Bet you wish that was you right now."

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    • On the 40ft wide balcony of a 450ft tall 820ft wide building at 42 feet high and above the main building Lord of the Stars and Madam celestial saber are seated on a couch next to a large screen split off into 400 screen sections. Their are 50 other Kig-yar on the balcony and a set of snacks and board games on a table next to the couch.


      Hear they simply observe the surroundings. Watching and waiting to see if anything happens.

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    • (GTG)

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    • (Sorry it took me 8 minuets to type all that and you guys posted 4 times by then, was I meant to be with you?)

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    • Visus Just smiles at Tyler 

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    • (if you want, we are looking from Uvok and it might be slow until then. I will also be away for the next few days, so my characters will not be used)

      Tyler "Any update on Uvok?"

      Jess, as her and Megan end their hug, "That's a negative. We've asked around and got nothing to show. Doesn't help that the people here don't want us here."

      Megan "They'll get over it soon enough."

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    • Visius "why wouldnt they want us here we are trying to help"

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    • Tyler "Well we did come to thier planet, blow shit up, and kill thier leaders in an attempt to set up a government where we will be telling them that thier ideology is basically wrong."

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    • Visius "Damn... so i guess we are the terrorists..."

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    • Tyler "To the government we are."

      Megan "To be fair, we are terrorists in the eyes of the Chat government and her supports. To those who support the Republic, we are freedom fighters."

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    • Visius "so what are our orders?"

      Talot "its to find the damn ape..."

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    • Jess "His name is Uvok," as she looks at Talot.

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    • Talot "once we meet up with him tell him to put some clothes on"

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    • Tyler, busting his chops, "Oh, you can't keep your eyes off?"

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    • Talot "no it is annoying plus it would be beneficial for him"

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    • Megan "So he does look at Uvok."

      Jess "That's enough from all of you. Go around and ask the locals if they have seen him; it's the best chance we have."

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    • Visius approches a group of civilians "Have you guys seen a Jiralhanae with dark brown fur, arround here lately?"

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    • Tyler goes door to door, asking people, and getting more rude responses then answers. On the coms, "Reminder, the people here are assholes."

      Megan "No, I think they honestly have no clue. It's not like Uvok is hard to miss."

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    • Visius looks at Tyler "yeah i learnt that the hard way... asked one question and got spat on"

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    • (I'll be gone for the next few days, so my characters will all be AFK. I'll be here for a few hours but I don't want to get my characters into a situation where they are holding up the story.)

      Tyler "Be happy that's the only thing they did. Anything worse and we might have to put a few down to defend ourselves."

      Jess "Let's hope we can diffuse the situation before that happens."

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    • Visius "Damn, i swear if one of them has a shotgun..."

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    • Jess "There is a difference between having a weapon and using it."

      Megan "Not to mention most of them are probably to scared to even wanna shoot us."

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    • Visius "but who would be scared of pretty old me?"

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    • Megan "Lot's of people sweet heart. You don't come off as a big ol' softy."

      Tyler "Not to mention you're with some of the galaxy's most wanted individuals. What is the current bounty on our heads?"

      Jess "2.5 million edits each."

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    • Visius "on your heads maby i dont think they have a bounty on me yet"

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    • Tyler "You were hunted down by Haloprov, and you just helped kill a three star admiral. Trust me, you got one."

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    • Visius "well thats just great... But i hope chicks like people with high bountys..."

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    • Megan "Kept telling yourself that," as she goes to another house. 

      Tyler "I've still got nothing. Not to mention how stupid this feels."

      Jess "The only other option is interrogating the soldiers we've captured. But there is a good chance they will have has little information as the people here."

      Tyler "Beats being a door to door salesman."

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    • In a unknown location a Kig-yar walks up to a civilian waiting at the bus stop.

      the Kig-yar: *speaking in Kig-yar* he shows him a photo of Uvok.

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    • Visius "i have nothing as well" (sorry i was at a interveiw)

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    • Megan "So do we move onto the prisoners."

      Jess "At this point, I guess so."

      (wish hiddenlich was here)

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    • Visius "Just let Talot interigate the prisoner"

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    • Jess "Considering how unethical he is in his methods..."

      Tyler "Not to mention getting nothing out of Haloprov with them."

      Jess "Right. We need to treat them not as prisoners or our enemy, but living beings with feelings."

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      Tyler "Not to mention getting nothing out of Haloprov with them."

      Jess "Right. We need to treat them not as prisoners or our enemy, but living beings with feelings."

      14 chat solders begin walking tword the group in a slightly curved V position with rebent edges.

      The lead chat solder: "Ahhh so you do care about us. Then its a darn shame our orders are as reinforcements to retake the city. ALL MEN, PRESENT! They all point M250 Squad Support Weapons at the group* FIRE!

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    • (right, because 14 soldiers could just waltz down an occupied city, but whatever.)

      The team engages the 14 Chat troopers as they take cover, plasma and gun fire filling the air. 

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    • (You ever play gods of war and send only one man to hunt an elephant? its just to funny to watch to resist. Either that or these guys are just a diversion for a larger wave trying to get in somewhere else. Oh weal I tried to excuse it, but truth is mistakes where made.)

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    • Talot "usually my methods do work... once i skined a kig-yar alive lets just say that he started talking, then i fed him to the rats whilst he was still alive..."

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    • (That's what he gets for talking.)

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    • (lol)

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    • (we need to wait for lich and the crew to proceed)

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    • Civilian: *To the Kigyar* I have seen this hairball before. During the invasion he was roaming down this street killing every Chat serviceman in sight. If you are looking for him, I advise you follow the road.

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    • Talot hears this "alright lets get going"

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    • The Kig-yar nods and hands him a gold coin with a ruby incrusted in the center. "In case you need home repairs, don't tell anyone" He then moves on heading down road.


      (Lol a exact duplicate of the post wikia ate.)

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    • Talot growls "LETS GO!"

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      • Marines check every section of the street, making sure they investigate every impact sight, destroyed vehicle, and even the insides of crumbled buildings. Eventually, they come across a destroyed car and the lower body of a dead legionnaire. A damaged gravity hammer sticks to a metal enclosure in the wreckage of the car.

      (I will be gone after 5:00 UTC and won't be back until Monday)

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    • (c u th N.)

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    • Lord of the STARS wrote:
      (c u th N.)

      (What?)

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    • (i think he means see you then)

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    • The Kig-yar doesn't even have to use his noise, easily following the destruction marks he finds Uvok.


      (And that's where I will wait for you.)

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    • Talot coms* "we found him... finallly" 

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    • From the sky a portal opens up, and a creature comes out, one that is very reptilian in appearance, if standing would be 15ft tall, with a large wingspan, a mouth full of sharp teeth, eagle like eyes, hands like that of a Kig-yar with raptor like arms, raptor like legs, feet like that of a kig-yar's hands, a tail with a fan on the end made of retractable bone shell plate, scaly skin that can resist bullets, armor made of unknown metal that covers the chest, the back, the legs, and the shoulders, on his shoulders are 2 launchers loaded with 15 missiles.

      From his side belt he draws a decorative polished metal sword handle with slightly upcurved crossgaurds, the sword handle then emits a large flame, which is bended by field generators into the shape of a long sword blade, then hardened. Slightly flickering on the edges and the point, glowing brightly.

      The creature roars with volume on par with a sirens roar, shattering near by windows: "This galaxy WILL know that I am hear! Who is the one they call Visus?!"

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ahoTmTx5qT0

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    • Visius dashes to cover "What the hell is that thing? AND HOW THE HELL DOES IT KNOW MY NAME?" he loads a clip into his rifle

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    • The creature spots him: "I am Kamin-natona-hacava-toom-hym, You are the first to take my presence in this galaxy sireosly, so I am forced to break the rules of diplomacy to prevent a worse outcome them if this attempt back fires. If you continue to ignore the voice of peace, it will be to late. And when it is to late.....

      You I hear are a great warrior, I will give a example of what this galaxy faces if it just sits by and watches. What say you?"

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    • Visius "who tald you about me?"

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    • Kamin-natona-hacava-toom-hym tosses a cube before Visius feet, it ignores the rules of gravity and lands softly... nay, floats above the ground. A spark flickers and the light is bent into the shape of some one "Perhaps you know him as well? I hope he knows his tactics. Tell me, would you prefer to duel, or would you prefer be as an ally?

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    • (each time I post I will go on a walk while I wait.)

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    • Visius Coms "can i get Karl on the coms" there is static "damn it!"

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    • Lord of the STARS wrote:
      (each time I post I will go on a walk while I wait.)

      "Sorry i was brushing my teeth!"

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    • Kamin-natona-hacava-toom-hym: "Make your choice, their will be a day the whole galaxy will have to do the same, and I wouldn't be surprised if their still laughing then, when its to late!"

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    • Visius "i cant make a choice i am not the one in charge here, when i get a connection to the people in charge they can answer your question" he sighs "but if it where up to me i would have you as an ally, but i still dont know if you are trying to trick us"

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    • Kamin-natona-hacava-toom-hym's fire sword extinguishes and he sheaths it, his missiles close into their launchers slots and he lands, standing much as a raptor would stand. "Perhaps your not the only one capable of answering my question. Their may still be hope. Now, what is your situation?"

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    • (Lol wish I could put this RP on a separate thread, its a darn shame I already did, so its to late to do that.)

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    • Visius "sorry but i cant tell you are situation at the moment, for all we know you could be working with the chat or something else... but once you meat our leader he may tell you"

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    • Kamin-natona-hacava-toom-hym: "I've considered it, while my ship arrived at Gaeto the second one arrived at Eafth. If the chat are as bad at welcoming diplomats as the NGR I could fake being on their side long enough to see what her situation is at their planet, then I could rescue her. But my job is not to take sides."

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    • Visius "rescue who?"

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    • He uses his hologram device and shows a image of someone who looks very much like him, but with lighter color and lacking a aerodynamic crest. "Her name is Herronuna-ackuak-him. She is my wife. When we where sent to this galaxy was our wedding day, and when, nay if we reunite will be our honeymoon. But when I arrived at Gaeto Karl was to busy with the war, so he sent me with his most trusted to keep me safe and comfortable to discuss why I have came. They where not very curios. It was only when I nearly died they finally fed me one time, and then I tried asking my questions.

      Then, I have waited...... and waited.... and waited for more to happen. But eventually I put 2 and 2 together and realized by the time I will talk to anyone again, the Ptranosaurian fleet will have arrived. And my failure would bring shame to my family! They don't even know I'm not still their! Now, I am not going to take my chances that the chat are going to do a better job then your people have. Assuming she is even alive I must find her, before I decide my next move."

      (sorry for the wait people like to bug me.)

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    • Visius looks down "I am sorry... the chat would have probably captured her and then tourtured her to death..."

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    • Kamin-natona-hacava-toom-hym: "If they have, then your galaxy is doomed, and I am to live the rest of my life in sorrow and solitude, having lost my wife. We do not continue on one with out the other. Something you will learn the hard way, as at least it is only doomed temperately. Those who will survive what is to come, will be more then glad they did once civilization is brought to this galaxy."

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    • Visius "i know what that is like... but how is our galaxy doomed?"

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    • Kamin-natona-hacava-toom-hym: "Lets be honest, once the armada of armadas shows up, your native military will not stand a chance. You will be out numbered, out fleeted, out advanced, out gunned. But that is only the storm before the rain bow. Once your galaxy is conquered, which will most likely only take a few days, you will be in paradise. With the Ptranosaurian empire looking after you you will have better buildings, better medicine, and you will never expereance the hunger I have expereance hear ever again."

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    • Visius "more likely you will make us your slaves" he tightens his fists

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    • Kamin-natona-hacava-toom-hym "Unless of corse I don't fail my mission. Its impossible I know, but I must try. If I could get to Eafth, their is still a chance their can be peace, and our military presence will be unneeded, and their for canceled. But I mustn't interfere with your mission on New Havan. Time goes by, and will not wait for me, so I must make hast."

      He activates a device that begins charging. "You might nit want to be in the way when this goes off, it will suck you into slip space. So I will return to the air before triggering it to prevent accidents."

      He spreads his wings and takes flight.

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    • (gtg)

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    • ((Saved by the bell, me to and I lost my mouse.)

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    • Visius "what the hell kust happened?"

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    • The creatures words echo in visus's head

      Lord of the STARS wrote: Kamin-natona-hacava-toom-hym "Unless of corse I don't fail my mission. Its impossible I know, but I must try. If I could get to Eafth, their is still a chance their can be peace, and our military presence will be unneeded, and their for canceled. But I mustn't interfere with your mission on New Havan. Time goes by, and will not wait for me, so I must make hast."



      A few weeks earlier

      http://thdf.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:40232

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    • (lets wait for the others to get back)

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    • Marine: Okay, so we found evidence of his presence here. But where is he?

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    • (ok I will wait.)

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    • Talot "alright"

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    • (Glad some one is finally online, but the cast present is insuficiant to contenue this RP, and RPs that where never finished are going to remain neglected because of it, so lets think of something else to do.)

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    • (guessing not much has happened)

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    • (nope.)

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    • (so what has happened then?)

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    • (Apparently an extraterrestrial from a completely different galaxy showed up wanting to bring peace and unity to the entire THDF Galaxy. He asked Visius if he would support a new order, but Visius said that he wasn't the one who should be making the decision.)

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    • (I see. Any update on Uvok?)

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    • DMR4REAL wrote:
      (I see. Any update on Uvok?)

      (They found the lower half of a legionnaire and Uvok's gravity hammer wedged into a destroyed car)

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    • (so he's still MIA, okay)

      Tyler "Still no update on the big brute?"

      Megan "No, but appreantly we have bigger events to attend too."

      Tyler "Like what?"

      Karl, on team coms, "Like an outside force telling us to unite under it."

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    • (I gtg be back in about 12 hours.)

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    • Visius runs over to Tyler "i need you to get Karl on the coms right now!"

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    • Tyler "I'm guessing for the alien being thing?"

      Jess "I'm putting him on all coms now."

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    • Visius "yeah it was talking to me... about us all getting enslaved or something like that"

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    • (it had left awhile ago through a slip space device)

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    • Karl "I'm still a little busy dealing with the Chat, but if this creature insists he wants to bring the galaxy together, it will probably be through war."

      Megan "Why is that?"

      Karl "Because the only way we work with the Chat is to fight a threat bigger then us."

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    • Visius "sounds about right"

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    • (once again, not much room for plot prgression at the moment)

      Tyler "Great, will have to get use to fighting along side the Chat again."

      Megan "Hey, it worked out, didn't it?"

      Tyler "I guess so."

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    • (I don't really know what to do now. I wasn't expecting Kamin would appear in this roleplay)

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    • Hiddenlich wrote:
      (I don't really know what to do now. I wasn't expecting Kamin would appear in this roleplay)

      (same but we will figure it out)

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    • Visius "i say we make a 'temporary' truce with the chat then get right back to it... sir"

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    • Jess "Easier said then done."

      Megan "On the one hand, maybe the truce won't have to be temporary. On the other, we might kill each other before that even happens."

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    • Marine: Motion detected!

      • HK Droids break out of the ground

      HK Droid: TARGETTING PARAMETERS ONLINE. INITIATING KILL PROTOCOL AB-1341148.

      • The HK Droids open fire on the group

      (It gives us something to do)

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    • Talot overhears this "Are you saying make full peace with the chat?" he grunts "please remind me why we are fighting this war again?"

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    • Tyler, rasing his rifle, "We can talk about this later. For now, we got contacts."

      Jess "What kinds of Tangos?"

      Megan "From the coms, seems to be droids." 

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    • Talot "obviously" he raises his BFG-90 and fires into a few of the droids

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    • Megan "I'm counting ten tangos, over."

      Tyler, killing one, "Copy, make that nine."

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      • An HK Droid slaughters three marines through the use of active camouflague
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    • Visius jumps to cover and pulls out his sniper "ROGER"

      Talot firing from the hip at the enemy "make that 7"

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    • Galactic Republic soldiers move in. Megan "Get the wounded out of here."

      Jess "Megan, I'll cover them. Tyler, push up with Talot."

      Tyler "Don't have to tell me twice," as he opens fire. 

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    • Talot carrys on hip firing his LMG

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    • Visius snipes one "THEY ARE AT HALF STRENGTH" (btw gunspider is letting me keep Visius, because i dont think he is coming back)

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    • (why he no come back?)

      Tyler "Keep up the fire, just a few left."

      Megan runs in, disarming one before snapping it's neck.

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    • (no idea hes probably to busy playing those gosh darn violant video games! xD)

      Visius "covering fire!" he fires his sniper killing 3 of the bots

      Talot shoots one of the droids in the leg then stamps on its head

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    • Jess "Clear, cease fire!!!"

      Tyler, repeating Jess, "Cease Fire!!!"

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    • Visius presses a button on his sniper which compacts it into a rectangle he then clips it on his back "alright what now, hopefully that is the rest of them"

      Talot grins "SO! like i was saying why are we fighting this war again?" 

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    • Jess "To save the people and liberate the galaxy."

      Megan, taking a seat, "Not going to be able to do that fighting both the Chat and this new force, that is if they wanna fight."

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    • Talot "so basically you want to save and liberate the galaxy by making full peace with the people we are against?"

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    • Tyler "If it brings an end to the fighting, have we not achieved peace?"

      Karl, with coms back on, "That's enough, all of you. I will be handling any negotiations that might go down."

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    • Talot shakes his head "i dont get you humans..."

      Visius closes his eyes and excales

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    • Megan "Right, because you pick fights with everyone including your friends, so you're the fucking example."

      Tyler "We pick and choose our battles. We can't fight the Empire if we have to deal with a new threat, and vise verse."

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    • Visius puts his hand to his head "guys please... specially you Talot"

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    • (dinner)

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    • (alright)

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    • DMR4REAL wrote: Tyler "I'm guessing for the alien being thing?"

      Jess "I'm putting him on all coms now."

      Kamin-natona-hacava-toom-hym: "My apologies, your signal wasn't able to reach me until I exited slip space and waited 4 hours for it to travel. What is it you would like?"

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    • Karl "I would like to know your intentions."

      Jess "Alright people, this is it."

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    • Visius "is there anything i can do to help the civilians here?"

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    • Megan "Not kill them."

      Tyler "Not our job, so don't worry about it."

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    • Kamin-natona-havaca-toom-hym: "For years we have observed your planet in sorrow as you have killed each other, fighting a galactic war that has decimated your worlds, even to the point of building a primitive man made mobile planet with the fire power to destroy a entire world. Crude but effective, effective enough to break our hearts as you destroy your own living worlds homes and planets. In the end, we have decided we must interfere. Put a end to your conflicts. Remind you you are brothers and sisters and sons and daughters. 2 of us are present in your galaxy now, we are hear to talk to you with the voice of reason, convince you to be at peace. If we fail we will have to bring you civilization by force. No one wants it to come to that, that is why we are hear as diplomats."

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    • Visius sits down against a wall "I just feel really bad... on the journey here i saw a kid, got to be about 5 to 6 years old face down in the dirt with his arm blown off..." he looks down 

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    • Karl "I don't take to kindly to blackmail Kamin. If we are to have serious talks, they are to be in person, not through coms."

      Jess "It seems they are like the Chat and us, wanting to impose thier will on others."

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    • DMR4REAL wrote: Karl "I don't take to kindly to blackmail Kamin. If we are to have serious talks, they are to be in person, not through coms."

      Jess "It seems they are like the Chat and us, wanting to impose thier will on others."

      Kamin-natona-havaca-toom-hym "Have I, .... never mind. where would you like to meet?"

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    • Karl "A neutral planet, with Knightmare there as well."

      Blue "Sir?"

      Karl "It's our one chance to bring peace Blue."

      Tyler "Welcome to war, it sucks."

      Jess "Both of you, stop it."

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    • Visius looks down even more and closes his eyes

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    • Kamin-natona-havaca-toom-hym "Agreed. And I will try not to speak on coms unless I need to. From your tone I feel some of what I said may have been classified, and I do not know if your communication is secure. "

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    • Karl "Oh, so you do know fear? And the Chat has been given one too? Can you put Knightmare on this call?"

      Blue "Is that a good idea sir? He can track our location."

      Karl "And we can track his."

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    • Visius "i... i just need a moment..." he gets up and walks into one of the half destroyed building

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    • DMR4REAL wrote: Karl "Oh, so you do know fear? And the Chat has been given one too? Can you put Knightmare on this call?"

      Blue "Is that a good idea sir? He can track our location."

      Karl "And we can track his."

      Kamin-natona-havaca-toom-hym "You wish to track me as well? I have nothing to be ashamed of, if it is your wish I grant it unto you."

      A dot appears on radar showing a ship in a star quadrant.

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    • Karl "These aren't the smartest aliens. Thanks for telling me where you are. My A.I and I where discussion about Knightmare, not you."

      Blue "What know sir?"

      Karl "Get the commandos, we are going on an adventure."

      Tyler "Visius, let's go. We are heading back to the fleet for our next mission."

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    • Visius "alright... i may just need a little bit of sleep thats all..." 

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    • Megan "Sleep on the shuttle then, we gotta move."

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    • Visius "alright now lets get to that shuttle"

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    • The group enters the shuttle as they sit down. Jess "This is going to be huge."

      Tyler "Yea, either we fight a two front war or we team up with our old enemies."

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    • Visius closes his eyes and goes to sleep (gtg)

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    • The shuttle takes off as it heads back to the main fleet. Megan "You think the Chat will want to work with us?"

      Jess "Knightmare wants peace and power, but he knows he can't fight a two front war."

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    • (I know you like to post wait a turn then post, so I will try to think of something... I think I still have a npc Kig-yar with you, he could say a line or 2 so it can work.)

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    • Lord of the STARS wrote:
      (I know you like to post wait a turn then post, so I will try to think of something... I think I still have a npc Kig-yar with you, he could say a line or 2 so it can work.)

      (yes, but my characters have not met up yet, though they will soon.)

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    • (ok)

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    • (for clearification)

      New Galactic Republic thread: http://thdf.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:40322

      Chat Empire thread: http://thdf.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:40232

      Both of them are the factions talking with the Ptranosaurians. Feel free to create or use characters for either thread. 

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    • DMR4REAL wrote: The group enters the shuttle as they sit down. Jess "This is going to be huge."

      Tyler "Yea, either we fight a two front war or we team up with our old enemies."

      (You know, just putting this out their, you know what I find ironic? at this point the success of the diplomats mission being accomplished is guaranteed. See if the Ptranosaurian sees the chat and the NGR team up to face them, it would technically count as peace being made. The invasion would then be canceled as the Emperors plans to conquer the galaxy would be with out justification, and so if he tried to go through with it anyway his own people would know what they would be doing is wrong, and begin to see him as a tyrant rather then a leader. Their are some laws after all even he isn't above in their society.)

      (Long story short the diplomats might actually win by losing. lol.)

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    • (but peace would probably be temporary. Like the Soivets and USA after WWII)

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    • (when i first heard about making peace with the chat, i was thinking it would basically be like making peace with the nazis, even after knowing what they did to the jews...)

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